Design Composition You are obviously good with the tools, yet I am still waiting for this to show in your work. Watch your edges they are very harsh – as Kevin says it is like a fighting poster, but the text so close distracts form the image and I lose the edge. Your negative space is very difficult in the middle. The yellow and red Ferris wheel color is great – 2 hours to do that is great but you have over 12 hours in class?. Text: What is the most important in this image? The text is overshadowing the image, which is hunkering on the edges? The text is right next to the face of the lion which creates a pivotal point = but why is there a point of interest there? Too many different type faces and they all look a little stretched. Technique Why did you print it in a gif file. The text in purple is very difficult to see. I know you have the skills and have refused to really throw yourself into the illustrator program Why – you could be so good?
Design Composition You are obviously good with the tools, yet I am still waiting for this to show in your work. Watch your edges they are very harsh – as Kevin says it is like a fighting poster, but the text so close distracts form the image and I lose the edge. Your negative space is very difficult in the middle. The yellow and red Ferris wheel color is great – 2 hours to do that is great but you have over 12 hours in class?.
ReplyDeleteText: What is the most important in this image? The text is overshadowing the image, which is hunkering on the edges? The text is right next to the face of the lion which creates a pivotal point = but why is there a point of interest there? Too many different type faces and they all look a little stretched.
Technique Why did you print it in a gif file. The text in purple is very difficult to see. I know you have the skills and have refused to really throw yourself into the illustrator program Why – you could be so good?